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Furniture
by Arkun
Description
Susan decided to give as a gift to her daughter Mery, but she couldn't find what she wanted.
Comments
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Ben Zingo
try pushing the anticipation and overshoot so that the characters don't feel so stiff, and film yourself for reference!
Clara Beacco
You can add a shot where we can see both characters, that will help the viewer place them in the scene. It needs work on the lipsync part. Keep going!!