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maple furniture
by david
Description
guys forgive me. this was a long shot. nothing maple about it.
Comments
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CW
What room are they talking about?
Nolan
the movements are stiff, you're story is unclear, and the facial expressions are could use work. I'm glad you gave this a go, keep going.
Clara Beacco
Try to help the viewer understand the scene. What are they talking about? Are they shopping online, looking at pictures on the tablet, are they looking for an appartment? Show us what they're looking at so we understand the point of the scene. That will definetely help.
Darren Evander
eye look dead