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realy?

by ibrahim

Final Rating: 4.45. Finished #45 out of 65 entries.

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Animator

ibrahim

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

10 days

Description

reaction of the girl who has something for the first time in her life :)

Comments

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Nolan

The jump comes off as if she's on fast forward. the lip sync also feels pretty off. The other movements while fast for my taste, do sell an eager character.

Clara Beacco

Nice movements and poses! Try to add a bit of movement when the girl gets off the table and at the end when they both stop so it doesn't look completely static. Just a little, like you did with the hair, that looks very nice.

Caleb Rankin

Great concept and fun performance. I would definitely add some movement to the holding poses to make it look a little more life like.

Darren Evander

lypsinc could be fixed

JP

Wonky performance