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SPLIT PERSONALITY
by munish
Description
After an Odd Incident.. Girl is confused wt to do.. Wt no to do..
Comments
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Shaun Bartoo
This has an interesting style to it. I kind of dig the snappy timing. I'd work on polishing your arcs to reduce the jitteryness and tightening up the lip sync next month.
Jacob Lim Yi En
maybe more work on the mouth shapes
David Fliesen
Cute, but hard for your audience to read the animation. You confuse them as to what is happening and if it's one girl or two talking. Keep things simple for your audience to understand. An animation is no good if you lose the audience with it.