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Grocery Store Heist

by David Fliesen

Final Rating: 3.51. Finished #54 out of 61 entries.

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Animator

David Fliesen

Experience

I learned Maya at the Art Insitute, but am now learning animation in iClone 7

Time Taken

16 hours to animate and about 4 hours for character design, set and lighting

Description

Chalice and TamTam are back at their Manhattan flat after a narrowly escaping arrest from knocking over the local neighborhood grocery store. These two starving animators had to make rent this month to stay in their flat during the pandemic.

Comments

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Natalie

Good start. Body movements seem boring, not matching the tone of the dialogue, especially for the 2nd voice. Same for facial expressions. Can barely see much of the face with dark hair. Try different camera angles

David Fliesen

Very well done but tangents need a bit more work.