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A small talk
Two friends having a talk outside
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Tristan Riggs
love this style, nice characters :)
Shaun Bartoo
Nice character designs! The monotone grey works really well. I feel like your facial acting is a little monotone. It would be good to hit bigger emotions on the faces, especially in a shot like this. The lip sync is also not totally working.
Olivia English
Needs better posing, and lips don't synch
David Fliesen
Nice start, but needs a bit more development of the movements as it's still at the early stages of animation. Also try to bring a bit more of the 12 principles of animation into your works: https://ohmy.disney.com/movies/2016/07/20/twelve-principles-animation-disney/