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SARCASTIC TIMES
Rigs are Dana and Bonnie.
Dana and Bonnie are in custody, waiting to be interrogated.
Thank you!
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Isaiah Hoeninghaus
There's good poses, but the timing is a little floaty and even. If you held the key poses for a beat or two longer the timing would improve.
Tom Islava
I like the characters and the setting. The key on fr. 125 with the girl on the left smoking's a nice touch. But I see a lot of twinning, the hands are kinda flat and the overall movement feels way too even.
David Fliesen
Pretty nice and I like the secondary motions with the girl in the green shirt smoking a cigarette while listening to the other girl. Work on your eye movements and show a bit of breathing to add a bit more life into your characters.