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Baby Pictures
Description
A man talks to the child (offscreen) of his friend about receiving baby pictures of them.
Comments
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Alp Yamanel
Needs more up and down movements and the rotations to the side feel a bit too quick
Ben Zingo
the left & right motion feels a bit jittery, make sure you're thinking about anticipation, easing, overshoot, settle, etc
sometimes less is more!
Fabian
My only issue with this is the jerky/too much movement when he says "cute ugly baby". Doesn't feel natural
Eden
who is he talking to? he needed a focus point