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You were such a cute ugly babe!
This is my first submission to the 11 Second Club, hope ya'll enjoy it! Thanks!
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Ben Zingo
the big guy is often looking at a point above the little guy's head.
Make sure he's making eye contact!
Anthony
Great job. Both characters are animated very well and the lip sync is spot on. I'm not sure if it an issue with the rigs or not - and my review isn't reflecting this - but the skin is popping through the clothes throughout. The speaker's right leg is popping through his jeans the whole time.
My only real critique would be that the speaker's eye line is above the listener for the entire clip. It doesn't look intentional. The eyes go from the phone and the head turns to face the listener, but the eye line is never right. If the speaker isn't looking at his listener, what is he looking at?
Small thing in an otherwise great animation!
GLEB
The direction of the Big Guy's eyes is wrong. He looks past
Angie Mauney
This was really good! I felt that the characters really related well with the audio