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Vampire "life"
A vampire kills a kid and then claims to have given him life. Kid's not looking so good though...
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Natalie Wilkinson
Nicely done
Ryan D Lowe
Timing here sells this perfectly. Great stuff! Love his "revelation" pose. I feel the last end of the shot is a bit too chatty though. I would tone down the jaw. LOVE your mouth shapes, and accents. Not NEARLY enough of that this competition.
Babul Prasad
nice animation, lipsync not working, expressions are stiff
Danny Kneip
The vampire's jaw is hoppin' and boppin'!! The sync is pretty good overall, but that final line seems really over the top with the jaw up and down on every word - very unnatural, even for a vampire! ;-) "Life" is well animated is readable. You jumped the line of action, which is a pity, at F81-82. And I was expecting a payoff at the end as the camera moved closer to the 2shot, but the dead person never budged.