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Is he dead?

by Chris Marino

Final Rating: 4.48. Finished #89 out of 201 entries.

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Animator

Chris Marino

Experience

None professionally

Time Taken

couple hours a day throughout the month

Description

The story of a mad 'scientist' who ran out of time to render.

Comments

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Danny Kneip

The head bobs are really distracting because it's impossible to clearly see (and feel) the lip sync. His hand on the glass is good to start, but is then moved to a new play at F61, the thumb is not appearing to touch anything, the hand is too stiff overall. The woman's expressions are believable and well done, but the final head bob seems out of place.

Ryan D Lowe

There is a major pop/hitch on F30. Your SR character hits a wall.