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Dad is back
by Stefan Forde
Im now starting, i have been animating for a year
this took three weeks
Two sons' father is in a coma and one son tries his best to bring his father back he tried many times and is about to give up but he gives it a shot
Comments
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Daniel Vasconcellos
good lightning, needs more time in the animation, keep it up!
Moy Parra
I would focus on a much simpler story and make sure to execute that as best as possible rather than worrying about so many characters and elements interacting at the same time.
Amy Marie Baldwin
The poses are quite extreme and are off putting. Good effort though, it would've read a lot better if the first character didn't "break" so much if that makes sense?
Aaron Junyou
The facial expressions can be stronger for the blue guy. Also, I don't see the mouth of the grey guy move when he says his line.
Ryan D Lowe
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!