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Cryptic Vampire
Description
I got really good critique on this. But sad to say I couldn't work on it more than this. Sorry guys will do better.
Comments
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Moy Parra
good story idea. The characters need more life and make better use of the composition :)
Ryan D Lowe
This overall feels slow/floaty. Tighten the timing, and hold poses longer. Good luck!