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PLEASE
by RAHUL SHARMA
His soul mate left him because of his one unwilling act.........now these days he is still trying to make her understand that he was not wrong even she is not with him in present
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Anneke de Graaf
Looks great, but to much was going on. Maybee you can simplify it a bit more? Also the camera was moving a lot! But overall, good job!
Aritra Adhikari
very cool rahul..
Amartya Mukherji
animation is not bad at all. but i feel the camera movement and the background changes to be too disturbing. its almost impossible to track the character's expressions bcoz of that.
Ryan D Lowe
I hate camera moves! I liked this one... well done. Great take when she disappears. Awesome drag as well. I like. Your pose on F125 I think is too much. Don't really need it.
Babul Prasad
nice animation
raj
lighting could hv been more better............
riya
lookin very nice.................awesome!!!!!!
Danny Kneip
The interaction is nice, as is the sync. The camera movement is good, but only feels manic because the character is moving so quickly in that moment once the girl vanishes. The woman's fingers seem to go through each other at F23. I really like the subtle movement when she vanishes and his weight carries him forward. Good job overall!
Arturo
This is a great idea, all happening in his head, pretty cool. Try to guide the eyes more, when one character is talking, the other one should not move much. Indicate that he's going to talk by making him blink or move his head a bit, and then make him perform, that way our eyes are locked in a character at a time.