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Freedom

by Hemant

Final Rating: 4.98. Finished #58 out of 201 entries.

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Animator

Hemant

Experience

12

Time Taken

1 week

Description

Young Guy gives freedom to his pet bird though he luvs him a lot.He has a mixed feeling of sadness of loosing his pet & also feeling proud of giving his bird a freedom.Old guy thinks he killed him when he finds the bird missing

Comments

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Daniel Vasconcellos

Great idea!

Amartya Mukherji

good try... keep it up

Mahesh Waran

i see the subtle shake given to the oldman #awesome

Danny Kneip

Probably the first 76 frames are unnecessary. The old man's walk cycle is decent, as is his rising from the chair, though I'm not sure why he needs to take two good, hard looks inside the cage to make sure it's empty. The other man's sync is good, but I think he holds his head away from the window too long after the first line. The camera tracking back on the final shot is a great touch.

Irina Volishina

Ingenious scenario, good animation

Sarah Johnson

I really appreciate the originality of this piece! Especially after all the Frankenstein entries this month!

Rajesh Nath

nice fan. very good story.

Ryan D Lowe

The lip sync here is the biggest opportunity, try to utilize bigger/unique shapes. I would watch the limp though, it reads more as a pop right now.