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life of watermelon
Description
work in progress
Comments
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Jack Granger
I like your idea here but the guy on the right lacks upper body movement.
Casey Colledge
On frame 20 the screen right character completely stops. It could benefit from some follow through with the arms and shoulders as well as the chest. It just feels unnatural when he stops dead for those few frames.