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it's mistake

by ireshan

Final Rating: 3.04. Finished #173 out of 201 entries.

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Animator

ireshan

Experience

not

Time Taken

8 days

Description

working as 3d Generalist

Comments

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Colin Davey

The falling to the knees animation needs a lot more love. It looks jittery and the movement jumps uncomfortably.

Vinu Nair

its difficult to know whats happening in the scene ..

Michael Minasyan

movement not does not match idea

Ryan D Lowe

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Danny Kneip

Really over the top performance and the sync needs additional polishing.

Sergio Barragan L

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