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Vampire's Bite
by S
The night is dark and full of terrors...
Rigs from Long Winter Studio.
Comments
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Steve Luna
I like the decisions you made but I don't think the expressions on red shirt were strong enough. Also, you broke the 180 rule with red shirt. But overall, good stuff!
Danny Kneip
Though you've clearly jumped the line of action and confused your audience, in this case, I think it's forgivable because the opening shot is so crazy, we might as well also be jarred by the shot selection. Overall, I think it's well done and I really like the red shirt man turning on the cut F90, which puts everything into context. Was he also supposed to have a cane?? The performances are believable and well synced. This is a memorable piece for me.
Moy Parra
I like the story Idea. A suggestion I have is that in this sequence, the cuts are a little difficult to follow as the center of action cuts from screen left to screen right to screen left again in a very short period. Maybe with a little less eye travel we can catch up more of the cation.
Amartya Mukherji
nice, but need to give more smooth delays in the red T-shirt character like u have done in the Blue guy.
Ryan D Lowe
I just noticed on my second watch here. Is the SL character supposed to have a cane? There isn't one there! I'm going to assume he is and leave the same rating. IT seems you would of seen how hard the hand hits a wall based on the skill of the rest of the piece. Well done!