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In the lab
This is my first entry, I learnt a lot from doing it and I hope you'll like it !
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Ben Crouse
Nice staging and solid drawing skills. I think you're going for a subtle performance but I wonder if there is room to push things a little further to make it more entertaining.
Roger Crown
The first shot is staged properly,,,but the second could have a camera truck out or both char's within the shot at the camera pulled back about 5 feet so we can see the monstrous big guy in the background better for the end gag....Thanks and yes I fully expect to see more from you within these competitions....
Carlo Nicoletta
Looks good. I like his little intake before he gives his final line. I think you could speed up his turn a bit. The speed of that action doesn't seem to match the tone/defensiveness of his voice while he gives the "no I did not" line. Another take that might work would be to have him turn more quickly and raise his screen right arm up and to the left while giving a subtle shake on the head side to side. You could probably slow in his hand to a nice move and hold and then swipe it across to the right on "not!". Good job.
Himadri Sekhar Dhali
nice!!
Michael Minasyan
it woman voice
Ryan D Lowe
Simple, and clean. I like it. Could use some texture.
Omer Sharon
graet acting! and animation!
only thing is- i dont know if its just me or not- but i didnt understand the background was a huge hand, untill now :0