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My First Animation
This is my first 2d animation ever and I did it at school using toon boom. I wanted to make a piece that was at my skill level but also try to deliver a little humor as well. Advice is welcomed for future improvements. Thanks
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Gabriel
did not get the story, animations look a bit stiff
Ryan D Lowe
Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.
I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.
However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.
"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy
There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!