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Old man talking himself
by Jojo Pandit
A lonely old man trapped at ice desert area but he want to come out there. he see someone coming toward. than he talk to him self (psychological issue).
Comments
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Richard Clark
It started off great but then your characters don't move much after you establish them.
Edward Chris Evjen
The Ghost returns to the exact same pose he started in. Be sure to have a unique pose (That fits) for every idea.
Bruno de Coninck
On the animation, nothing to say. But the acting is very stoic. There really not a lot of motion here and I think you could be more aventurous in your work.
Nathan Greensmith
looks nice, I feel the characters acting and performances are minimal and a bit lost due to distance from the camera, but good effort.
Ramon Arango
What is the old guy doing before the ghost shows up? I think if he were interrupted while walking (slow as he is) the whole situation would feel more believable. A character should always have a provable objective (Ed Hooks - Acting for Animators)