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The kidnaping
by Melissa
The kidnappers who are speaking to the victim.
Comments
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Bruno de Coninck
Not bad but the moving hold at the beginning could be better. Also a little slow. I see a little bit of "talking head effect" on the end. Try to make youre pose more dynamic.
Nikolas Diamant
I like the hat flick
Richard Clark
I would find a better pose at frame 87 with the character holding the cup. Right now it's straight toward camera and the fingers are displayed so evenly...it makes for a bad pose in general. I like the camera work you did...very nice! There are times when the older character stops on a dime with his motions. I would finesse this more.
Nathan Greensmith
good point of view camera work, nice animation, good job.