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"Call Him"

by Karla Hernandez

Final Rating: 4.13. Finished #71 out of 151 entries.

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Animator

Karla Hernandez

Experience

Student/ 1-2 years

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

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Comments

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Nikolas Diamant

I think it would look better if the lean was after "merciful" good work though

Eric Raffle

your actions are going too much with the audio, try to give variation to your acting, you don't always have to put in a hand or body gesture when your character talks. Your lip-sync is not snapping enough and you needed clearer visuals on your speech

Richard Clark

Should try and flesh this out more. The performances look very robotic.

Bruno de Coninck

Good start, but I think you could add some breaking pose.

Nathan Greensmith

great shot, some nice poses, good animation, good job.