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Mafia run
by Stephen K
Main character on the run from Mafia as he owes them. Attempting to ring to reconcile things it appears to be too late!
Comments
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Robert Zhou
Good work. I think your walks are a bit too jerky on the head, kind of like a pigeon. Also, it might help to put the middle character further back in the scene at the end so she/he can actually look at the character on the left. I really like how you interpreted the scene though.
Bruno de Coninck
The key poses really need more work here. The overall motion is really floaty too. If you didn't used reference, I stongly suggest you to give it a try!
Nathan Greensmith
Great narrative, ok sense of timing with good camera angles. Character performance could be better. But over all good work.