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Decisions, Decisions...
by Roy Matos
These two only want you to make the right choice. Well... A Choice.
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Bruno de Coninck
Prety good over all. The first move of the first character is a bit slow and the frame manipulation of the second is kind of shy. It could be more exagerated, I think...
Nikolas Diamant
Hilarious second character! Good job
Tyson Haeh
Cool idea to have him grab onto the frame but the acting choices are lacking
Ben Halstead
Great posing! Not bad on the lip sync too. The main thing I would look into is the floaty movement between poses. Try pushing your eases
Nathan Greensmith
Some fantastic acting and emotion, great poses and animation. I love the breaking of the fourth wall. Awesome job.
Borislav Dimitrov
use props to sell the idea of what they are trying to say. right now is two talking persons, waving hands and walking around
Lea
Nice idea but could definitely be refined.
Kelly Holmes
Love the second characters entrance!
Kyra Toomey
Nice hitting the beats, but maybe try pushing it by hitting them a bit harder. Drag stuff as the character makes those fast actions and snap them into place soon after the body (keeping in mind overshoot and settle).
Samidha Kumar
nice staging... but work on the holds and timing. A video reference always helps :)