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The Merciful Bathroom Attendant
Wilfred the Merciful is not in the mood old man.
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Bruno de Coninck
Interesting idea. I love the contrast between the suptility of Malcolm and the caricatural animation of the old man but what is the bully doing on the left at the end. I'm a bit confused... Wand what kind of public washroom don't have door?
Ben Halstead
I love the acting for the old man.
Nathan Greensmith
Funny scene, good animation, I'm amused. Good work.
Shiladitto Gupto
the idea is good but needs a lot of improvement in the animation... malcom looks very stiff... its an awesome rig explore it, exploit it, make it explode in your work(well not literally you know what i mean)...
Owen Fern
Seems like you have poses that are just going into other poses, such as after he says 'see if he'll come save you'. Needs more subtle moving holds and breakdowns.
Paula Decanini
Old man flinging himself up is pretty amusing, but don't have him do the same pose twice with his right foot in the air. The cut-away at the end to show the third guy is unnecessary.
Nassim Briedj
hhhhhh
Ramon Arango
I really dont get it but I love it ^^. This lazy look to the right is brilliant!
malcolms eyes move too repetitive though. down up down up and the freeze. Research a little bit about eye movement or saccad. That would help your animation a lot.