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Back to life
by 林志豪
1 clam guy ,1 funny crazy guy
Comments
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ireshan
you need to focus on fundamental
Nikolas Diamant
Either he's got abs of steel, or you should have hime sit up with his arms. Everything else is good though
Ben Halstead
The lip sync is a bit munchy for the guy lying down. Also, I would use more reference for your movements. It's not easy to hold a half-sit-up like that unless you have serious abs! Not bad though!
Bruno de Coninck
Your animation seems very robotic here. The biggest probelm throught is, for me the notion of gravity. It is hard to belive that your character on the left is able to stay in suspention in the air like this. The way he moving up is weird too.
Nathan Greensmith
Animation needs a lot of refining, more realistic movements and more flow, good effort and keep practicing.
Evgeniy Shumskiy
The person on the left got very weird pose: usually hard to sit like that, without supporting yourself with hands.
p.s. maybe the best pose is to leave him lying down.
Kyra Toomey
The second buy must have abbs of steel, or is a vampire. He shouldn't have been able to lift himself up like that. He should have pushed himself up with his hands or elbows.





