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Back to life

by 林志豪

Final Rating: 2.75. Finished #138 out of 151 entries.

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Animator

林志豪

Experience

1 years~

Time Taken

1month

Description

1 clam guy ,1 funny crazy guy

Comments

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ireshan

you need to focus on fundamental

Nikolas Diamant

Either he's got abs of steel, or you should have hime sit up with his arms. Everything else is good though

Ben Halstead

The lip sync is a bit munchy for the guy lying down. Also, I would use more reference for your movements. It's not easy to hold a half-sit-up like that unless you have serious abs! Not bad though!

Bruno de Coninck

Your animation seems very robotic here. The biggest probelm throught is, for me the notion of gravity. It is hard to belive that your character on the left is able to stay in suspention in the air like this. The way he moving up is weird too.

Nathan Greensmith

Animation needs a lot of refining, more realistic movements and more flow, good effort and keep practicing.

Evgeniy Shumskiy

The person on the left got very weird pose: usually hard to sit like that, without supporting yourself with hands.
p.s. maybe the best pose is to leave him lying down.

Kyra Toomey

The second buy must have abbs of steel, or is a vampire. He shouldn't have been able to lift himself up like that. He should have pushed himself up with his hands or elbows.