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the thing

by stick cardona

Final Rating: 5.87. Finished #18 out of 107 entries.

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Animator

stick cardona

Experience

5yrs

Time Taken

7 days

Description

hmm. long story :D

Comments

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Skylar Zerr

This could be a really strong animation. I don't think you are a bad animator.
I think the hand gesture on 160 is too similar. You needed to change it up with a little more body acting.
The pose on "It's up there" doesn't read well. It could be interpreted as a middle finger. lol. And it might also be to similar to the first characters acting.

Sergio Candela Ramirez

Malcom's eyes seem to be a bit off sometimes, but good job anyway! :)

Jordan Lewers

Would've liked to have seen an action cut as the old man raised his hands the first time. Otherwise, the jump appears somewhat jarring because all our attention was still on the kid

Jakub Kupčík

It could use a bit more variety in hand gestures, but otherwise it's pretty great!

Emanuel Siu

one of the better ones I've seen for this competition! Great stuff!

Andrea

Well done, i like the acting!

Anonimator

I like the older gentleman's performance! The audio feels a little out of sync.

Darren Teh

Nice work! I know Malcolm has ugly fingers XD

jagdeep singh

fine

Kim Bourdette

Pretty nice arcs but you dont have to use the hands all of the time :)