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Care about Marcus
He really cares about Marcus, the goldfish...
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Skylar Zerr
HAHA its a really cute concept. bonus points!
Jodie
Cool designs, I want to know more about the green old little guy. The minimalist style in animation is okay but I think you could move the robot a bit when he does his hand gestures, lie when he wipes his eyes, he could straighten up as a contrast to him leaning over to start with. His head rotation could be effected by his hand wipe too, like his head is pull a bit when he moves his hand to screen left. One other thing, the camera move at the end. I see a slight look over at the Gold fish. I would have that look over more pronounced and have it start BEFORE the camera move. That way it looks like he is naturally influencing the camera move. Anyways, cool character designs!
Jean Lamy
Walking cycle needs improvement.
Michael Logar
it looks good, I like the characters. I would have liked to see more movement though. the diaper doesn't seem to move according to its weigh. and there is a glitch of disappearing tears at his neck.