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"I Know You Killed Him..."
by Shao Wen Tan
Ray has to make a choice about whether he wants to kill his boss, who murdered his close friend.
Comments
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Skylar Zerr
lip sync. so many with weak lipsync and decent posing.
Erin Goddard
body movements and lip sync feel like they need a little more definition but i really like the story and the framing of that last pose!
Kerem
That gun should have weight
Jakub Kupčík
I'm a bit confused about the secondary actions here. How does the case full of money and the gun relate to the dialogue? Makes no sense to me.
Jean Lamy
Nicely done overall but there should be more of a downward motion from the gun when he picks it up. That would help show weight.
Darren Teh
probably should tighten the timing a little...perhaps he could be looking where he is aiming at the end
Brian Heath
I like the twist at the end (305). I wish there were more motion with the stack of bills (171)