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Finding marcus
by praveenkv
emotionally depressed girl with dad... thanks for voting...
Comments
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Skylar Zerr
not bad. Her facial pose at the end of the animation doesn't quite suit the animation.
Nicki Pierce
Liked the character interaction and the environment was a fun one for the dialogue to play out. Some really great subtly with the father's hand on the wheel. The kid's movements were great, especially the shoulders and made the body feel like a connected entity. If anything, it might have been nice to punch in on the kid at the end to see their features closer but that's really an artistic choice.
Anonimator
I like the simplicity and readability of the performance you've done. I think if the camera was pushed in a littler closer (or longer lens), it would feel a little more intimate.
Darren Teh
Not bad...doesn't looked like he's driving at all tho.
jagdeep singh
nice