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Bartenders Wisdom

by Emanuel Siu

Final Rating: 4.35. Finished #64 out of 107 entries.

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Animator

Emanuel Siu

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

half the month on my spare moments.

Description

A sad kid goes to the person who has the best advice for everyone. Yea, even the young ones.

Comments

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Jakub Kupčík

Some actions were too exaggerated, especially the hand slam on "things". Otherwise a pretty decent animation.

Jean Lamy

Movements are too sudden. Slow down some parts and give the movement more gravity. When the arm goes up on frame 253, the hand should go downwards until it goes up on 261.

Andrea

The movement are a little bit strong;
To many frames with long freeze poses
But i like the staging choice!

Victor Pierce

I feel like the second guy's gestures, especially when he says "to feel.... things" are a bit too broad. Doesn't match with the tone of the character's voice. The first guy's animation is a lot more subtle, which is appropriate!