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No feeling
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Skylar Zerr
lip sync is good. this could be a very good animation, however i think you should have committed to the weight change on "It's up there"
would have made it a little stronger.
nice settle on the guy when he bends down, though.
Erin Goddard
Good animation, I would have maybe given the female character a bit more emotion and less attitude to suite the dialogue but overall well done.
Jean Lamy
Some movements are too fast for the first character and the facial expression isn't quite there. For the second character, I feel like he goes too quickly into his second pose, there is no anticipation. Nice work though, I like this one.
Kerem
women doesnt look like sad at all
Anonimator
I like the contrasting tone/mood you chose for each character - nice posing conveys that. I feel it would benefit from at least a couple accented moments... right now the animation feels pretty even all the way through, for both characters.
Kawin Suteepongsopon
Good story and animation.But first pose a man not good ..hands position is too low
-Cross one's arm a girl .it symmetry too :D
Darren Teh
Not bad.. Can't really feel the sad vibe from the female lead tho. The guy's a little floaty.
Florencia Irena
it's a good animation honestly. the movement are nice, and i love it but the acting and the expression somehow didn't match the situation.





