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Marcus
ship watcher man see the ice berg on the sea
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Ionita Iulia Petronela
Good idea
Amy Hook
I like this, but i feel you could have put more weight on the first guy as he leans on the barrier. Really overshoot a little on the main chest and have him rise again to emphasise the way he places his weight on his arms. Make it a quicker motion too.
Bradley Adams
Aha great use of the audio clip very well done.
Jean Lamy
Camera shots were good but the facials expressions were a little bit over the top. And the lip sync was a bit off. Nice job.
Jakub Kupčík
This was great, love the set up, the subtle acting, everything, the only problem I have is the lip sync, just didn't feel that great.
Anonimator
Nice facial expressions, interesting idea. Could use some accents in the motion overall, pretty floaty at the moment.
Tianyu Chen
cool idea, like it
Pallav Sharma
titanic.good
Jordan Barg
A little cliche with that reaction at the end but overall I really like it.