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Feeling Things
by David Joyner
Well, there's this lady, and feelings feel... bad... to her.
I started on this pretty late into the month, but promised myself I'd submit even if it wasn't done.
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Skylar Zerr
Its not bad. You needed to move Camera lefts character's right hand when he puts the cup down. its messing with your silhouette
Jean Lamy
Too much movement. And watch the hand position of the second character, it's an unnatural drinking position.
Amy Hook
I think it would be nice if you made the guy relax his grip on the cup a little, after he puts it down. Make it a little more natural, you know?
Ximin Chai
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Haritz TZ
60 fps?
Darren Teh
just imagine yourself holding the cup and drinking that way....yup.