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Nonsense

by IvesNeo

Final Rating: 4.46. Finished #48 out of 104 entries.

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Animator

IvesNeo

Experience

1 year as animation student

Time Taken

3weeks

Description

Mery asked Franklin about something she confuse , but Franklin answer those nonsense.
Even HUMAN speak the same language , sometime we still cant understand what other means.

Comments

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Lea

Practicing lipsync? You're showing a lot of teeth here, it's not very natural and ends up looking a little aggressive.

Micah Sells

There doesn't seem to be much purpose or decision to the characters' poses and gestures. It feels like they're moving just to have something to do during the scene. Still, the secondary animation on the woman for the OTS shot was a nice touch; makes them feel more like people and not rigged models.

Zachary Checkeye

Not sure the acting choices meld well with the audio.