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Drinks
by Yi Xian
Description
Hope you like it :D
Comments
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Laura Owens
Nice staging, and cool interpretation of the audio! The lip-sync needs to be tightened, and there is a lot of floating between poses. Keep working at your skills though!
Kirsten Schow
Exaggeration is good, but the movements don't feel fluid enough for the exaggeration. Needs more moving holds.
Aaron McGriff
Your lip sync needs work. More shape changes and opens and closes. Its missing alot of syllables so its looking pretty floaty. Nice work overall.
Zachary Checkeye
The characters' constant motions are very offputting, don't be afraid to give them near-stops and pauses.





