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Drinks

by Yi Xian

Final Rating: 4.28. Finished #54 out of 104 entries.

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Animator

Yi Xian

Experience

2nd year student

Time Taken

about a month

Description

Hope you like it :D

Comments

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Laura Owens

Nice staging, and cool interpretation of the audio! The lip-sync needs to be tightened, and there is a lot of floating between poses. Keep working at your skills though!

Kirsten Schow

Exaggeration is good, but the movements don't feel fluid enough for the exaggeration. Needs more moving holds.

Aaron McGriff

Your lip sync needs work. More shape changes and opens and closes. Its missing alot of syllables so its looking pretty floaty. Nice work overall.

Zachary Checkeye

The characters' constant motions are very offputting, don't be afraid to give them near-stops and pauses.