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Innocent guy
by sips
A guy explaining to his friend about the Maryland situation ,,
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Sarah Courtright
Fluid, but it would've been nice to see the other person.
Muhammad Zulhilmi
Nice but there are a few thing that I believe would improve this shot
First the composition. If you want to show the hands, better show it all. Don't crop it up there at the end
The facial could be more polish. Feels all too same. Contrast the expression.
Overall, not bad
Jordan Crownshaw
Would have put the other character in the animation, feels like a big lack of context. The movement of the head with the body and its expressions though is good, great squash and stretch in the face, but I'd probably have a tad more body movement and push the expressions more!
Dave Roddick
Would be better with both characters.
Branden Blowey
Nice acting and poses here!
sip
nice