« Back to July 2018 Competition
11_second_club_July_entry
Hello at first I am very happy to participate in the competition.
In the scene I want to show that a friend is trying to scare his friend by explain about a place called Marryland.
Congratulation in advance for the winner.
Thanks
Comments
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Christine Miller
You're malcolm character is a little floaty so I would add a little weight and pauses on him
Rahul Rishikesh
Nice costumes :D
Jordan Crownshaw
Seems as though this was quite Pose to Pose, too much going on with a lot of action. Try to simplify it down a little and think of what happens between each pose. That as well as the emotions don't seem to match the dialogue, do some self reference or watch other animations for inspiration :)