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Just Your Average Conversation

by Jordan Proffitt-Hilbert

Final Rating: 2.80. Finished #115 out of 129 entries.

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Experience

Beginner to Intermediate

Time Taken

Roughly over 20 hours

Description

I was not going for a direct backstory, but more for pose and expression. It is a simple conversation between the two characters. Fairly casual and developmental. I look forward to critiques!

Comments

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Jordan Crownshaw

Quite messy, movements are flying around all over, I'd really try and slow this one down. Their head and expression stay facing the same direction nearly the whole time, was it rushed? you need to make sure each body part complements their dialogue.