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Man with Wings
by YEN
Description
Assignment purpose :)
Comments
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Sarah Courtright
I'm sure I had a critique somewhere but the ending made me giggle too hard, I forgot what it was :)
Jordan Crownshaw
Got some nice body mechanics in there, though the acting falls a little short, and the...context is a little strange XD I'd work on making the actions work with the dialogue.
Branden Blowey
10/10 ending haha





