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Marryland

by ChinPeiQi

Final Rating: 6.24. Finished #13 out of 129 entries.

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Animator

ChinPeiQi

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

1 month spare time

Description

First time take part competition

Comments

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Brandon Trudell

Starts off strong but towards the end too many gestures start blending in together that don't seem to follow the dialogue

Brianna Paige

Nice gestures and poses!

Ailsa

The mouth shape is not very accurate

Jordan Crownshaw

The movements start out really well, but it then starts to get quite jerky in the later half, with the body randomly rotating too sharply. I'd also work on the pose of the guy with the gun, standing purely up straight isn't a very practical pose for shooting.

Branden Blowey

Good staging and setup, but lip sync and expressions could be more polished

Prashant Makwana

First good work out there
Also notice the curves aren't seems to be on line, like it's a little bit mechanical

Again good job

akash rana

Very nice concept

Tan Jeck Tong

Nice rendering~~~