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Evil lair
He really like evil lair.
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Christine Miller
There are a few times where the lipsync gets off, but otherwise the acting is really good
Rahul Rishikesh
Awesome! Definitely top. Could've pushed the expressions .
Mike Schanbacher
Nice scene! It was believable and appealing. A couple of nitpicks...I feel like in the first shot the character should be a little more to screen left so that his position on screen stays a little more consistent over the cuts...likewise, the second character could stay a little further to screen right....right now when he says "they have a lair!?," his eyes are more or less in the center of the frame and looking left...but then when it cuts, the first character's eye's are slightly further to screen right looking right...It would be nice to see a little screen space between their eyes, so it feels more like they are talking and looking at each other in the shots where there is no over-the-shoulder. Also, the laugh/breath the first character makes in the audio around frame 90 is missing, which makes it look a little disconnected, but that is pretty minor. Overall, great work!
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui
must be in top 5
Kenneth Ghann
really fantastic. everything is great.
Anais Larocque
Awesome job ! :D I wish there were more exaggerations before frame 122, but overall a smooth and fun animation.
Branden Blowey
GREAT stuff, man! The timing, the expressions, the poses, the rendering, they're all top notch!
Peyman Bodaghi
Good :)