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A Dream....

by Amrithraj

Final Rating: 3.99. Finished #76 out of 129 entries.

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Animator

Amrithraj

Experience

10 years

Time Taken

4 Days after office Hours

Description

A bad Dream

Comments

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Christine Miller

I would work more on solidifying the lipsync. Also, he looks kind of bug-eyed during a lot of it so I would lower the eyelids a bit

Jordan Crownshaw

Some good timing and poses in there! Good use of the body! I like the context :) I think it begins to fall down during the later half with it mostly being a single pose, push that further with some more poses to describe what he's saying and make it more obvious what's going on!

RaffiqRazali

It would be nicer to show the interaction between the second character

Dave Roddick

Would be better with both characters