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The evil lair
by Yagi
Two friends are talking about an evil lair.
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Jordan Crownshaw
It seems that the lip-sync mostly took priority in this. While it's good to practise, it's not the main aspect of the animation. It's good to practise character, and how their body gets that across, what they're feeling, why they're feeling it and how through the subtleties of their body movements. At the moment it seems as if the character animation took a backseat, but look at some animations and movies to see how they PUSH the characters in everything they say, every part of their body, their face, their movements and expressions, and try not to keep things so static.
Branden Blowey
Animations ok, but for some reason the audio's very quiet