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Delivery

by Arthur Tay

Final Rating: 4.38. Finished #62 out of 129 entries.

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Animator

Arthur Tay

Experience

1 year as student

Time Taken

1 month

Description

Welp... I tried...
Sorry for being bad

Comments

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Jordan Crownshaw

The context on this was actually pretty confusing...
The characters move by just floating, try to make them (even if they aren't) SEEM as if they are walking with some bobbing up and down, rotations/hip movement. Some good poses to go along with the dialogue here though, also try and keep the animations feeling more...human, less Pose to Pose.

Tom Islava

The movement feels too abrupt.

Charlesng95

Very nice and natural face expression!! Thumbs Up

Dave Roddick

I don't understand why the Amazon guy is telling this guy about Maryland.