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Delivery
by Arthur Tay
Description
Welp... I tried...
Sorry for being bad
Comments
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Jordan Crownshaw
The context on this was actually pretty confusing...
The characters move by just floating, try to make them (even if they aren't) SEEM as if they are walking with some bobbing up and down, rotations/hip movement. Some good poses to go along with the dialogue here though, also try and keep the animations feeling more...human, less Pose to Pose.
Tom Islava
The movement feels too abrupt.
Charlesng95
Very nice and natural face expression!! Thumbs Up
Dave Roddick
I don't understand why the Amazon guy is telling this guy about Maryland.





