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by Yohann
A nice men have to kill a chicken for dinner but he can't.
Comments
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Sebastian Gonzales
I like it! I think the movements are a bit floaty however which makes the character seem like they're balloons full of air.
Catherine Mullenger
Love the chicken.
The hit on the table is slightly out of sync with the audio. Try placing the visual hit before the audio hit, just by a couple of frames.
The cleaver in the human characters hand seems to lack a little bit of weight. Delaying the action might be a way to sell this a little more.
Hardik
Talk Topic doesn't match the turkey chopping.
I'm sorry I didn't notice that on wip post.
-- Ray's Eyes still in corner. Looks like he's looking at right side of that animal.
-- I liked that Scare in Turkey/chicken's Eye at the end.
Amanpreet Singh
GOOD STAGING, BUT THE OVERALL ANIMATION WAS VERY SLOW. NEEDS IMPROVEMENT IN AUDIO SYNC IN SOME PLACES, OTHERWISE GOOD WORK.
Edd Jones
Adding the chicken is nice touch. adding more chicken reactions would help this piece.
Leonardo Rivera
The characters nose on the right has too much movement, its distracting. I think this shot could be better staged if the characters werent side view but shifted more towards the camera.