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In Jail

by P Carey

Final Rating: 5.01. Finished #33 out of 84 entries.

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Animator

P Carey

Experience

some

Time Taken

a few days

Description

Cop and con.

Tags
2D

Comments

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C h o c o b i l l y

The heads feel bouncy. Character design is nice. The mouth shapes are maybe morphing too smooth? Maybe something more snappy animation on the mouth shapes like Family Guy style.

Isabelle Dussault

That would be very nice it the mouth weren't wobbeling like that. The lips should be held closed a bit longer and sometimes the mouth should be less opened to feel the words better.

Edd Jones

simple but very effective.

AlisaHassett

The mouth shapes are super distracting, next time I'd try hand animating the mouth or creating a library of symbols.