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Three's a Crowd
by Coltin
After work inspection...
I guess you could say Jim got SATURNed down... anybody?... no?... ok xD
sidenote: I created the song near the end of the video for this project. It is not copyright material. Hope you enjoy :)
Comments
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Fred
Really no need for the stuff at the end. The setup and animation for the dialogue is really nice; good acting choices and facial expressions the characters.
Jamie F
Nice - could have pushed the expressions a bit more
Slayne Yew Chien Hao
Why he can modify his sound?
Milky
The storyline is quite draggy, and the camera angle could be improved.
Catherine Mullenger
The small gestures and facial expressions are really nice. There's a great sense of awkward humour in your eye darts and shoulder lifts.
The mouth shapes sometimes feel a little too small for the sounds expressed. Frames 188 and 266 are particular moments that lept out.
Amanpreet Singh
STAGING COULD HAVE BEEN A LOT BETTER.
Cola Dunn
Funny, but you used additional sound effects and music to add quality to your animation.
Elisabeth Janerka
what.
Isabelle Dussault
That was very good until the point you added sound. That's against the rules and added nothing to your story.
Tobi
It was supposed to be just 11 seconds.
Leonardo Rivera
The story had me and then it lost me.
Andi Pearson
wow! i love the lighting and the cop's expressions are pretty funny and flirty I love it. Great use of showing and not telling, the Area 51 sign is not shoved in our face but is more of a detail we are excited to find. I love it!
steven
Great animation and all but I don’t think ur allowed to add additional audio
Jackie Nguyen
Good arm moment!
Sierra Curry
I really like this. Not sure if adding the music and sound counts for editing the voice clip? Strong piece overall, just don’t know if that’s allowed for competition.
Lauren Kimball
Animation was really good without the added bit -- also, I think it's against the rules to add to the audio.