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Three hours before...
by Denis
Everyone need coffee
Comments
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Steve
Expressions and movements were on point.
George Perry
Love the exaggerated movements. The shot from inside the shelf was great!
Henry Barbee
Solid animation! However, while I can tell these two are frustrated with each other, I don’t really get why. Making the story more clear would help. Also, I feel like the force he hits that coffee cup against the vending machine with would shatter it. This could be fixed by simply using a metal shader instead of one that looks ceramic. Then we wouldn’t expect it to shatter.
Natalie Spangler
I really like your style but the ending bit feels really overacted. I would tone that down by like, 90 percent. Keep it up though!